Comments on: The Journey Begins: Part One

By: Tony Single

Tony Single — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 11:39:14 +0000

I think she'll discover a boat and use it to drift across the sea to greener pastures, or get wrecked on the rocks trying... the sea can be capricious that way. .-= Tony Single´s last blog ..Taking the Other View =-.

By: Sara

Sara — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 21:38:31 +0000

@ Serena — I am pleased that you liked this story so far. Also, that you found your own way out of depression/grief. I think that’s what I like about this story — it’s a sharing of loss. We’ve all felt it in some form, perhaps not the same as my character, but most of know it’s sting.

I also appreciated your comment about the sea. Given that the sea is my soul ground and the place I go to recover and in touch with my true self, I couldn’t have had go through this in any other place. Thanks for sharing your thoughts:~)

By: Serena

Serena — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 23:36:12 +0000

OH, I have felt that same heartache and emotional pain after a relationship split. For months I went into a deep, dark depression until, one day, I just woke up one morning and felt drawn to doing something creative so went crazy over Feng Shui….playing with Feng Shui is what helped me climb out of the well of depression and heal.

Great story, Sara! I love that she’s near the sea. If she doesn’t get back with Ben, I would like to think that she has been widowed rather than divorced. I can’t wait to read Part Two.
.-= Serena´s last blog ..MONDAY PHOTO-A-WEEK =-.

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:58:58 +0000

@ Arswino — You’re welcome about sharing this story. I loved this opportunity. That’s what’s so neat about blogging…you can put things out there and see if they fly and there are so many wonderful bloggers, like you, who do just that:~)

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:56:49 +0000

@ Melissa — I’d love to read your fiction writings and will pop over to check them out. I will check out zenhabits.net, but first I’ll visit you:~)

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:55:05 +0000

@ Vered — Thanks for your nice comment. Regarding you writing fiction, there’s a first time for everything! You’re an excellent writer and I have no doubt that fiction would easily be done by you. After all, fiction is just telling a story…a story that’s made up, but almost all fiction has seeds of truth in it. That’s true of this story, as well:~)

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:51:40 +0000

@ Chris — Why thank you, sir:~) It wasn’t easy, but I’m really glad I did this. It makes me feel lighter, as if by publishing this story I’ve given something inside me freedom. Come back for Part Two. I think it will complete this story:~)

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:49:04 +0000

@ Kathy — I’m pleased that you liked Part One and hope that you will return for Part Two. I will not say anything, but it’s not all gloom and doom. Letting go can sometimes be…”the thing you thought you never could do, but you did.”

By: Sara

Sara — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:46:38 +0000

@ Zeenat — You are so nice…thanks for what you said about this story. I agree with you about grief as I had my share and I’ve cried more than my share of tears, but you are right it IS important to let it out:~)

By: Arswino @ Inspirational Quotes

Arswino @ Inspirational Quotes — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 07:26:25 +0000

Hi Sara, I don’t suppose you could write such a beautiful story.
Thanks for sharing with us.
.-= Arswino @ Inspirational Quotes´s last blog ..A Child’s Angel =-.