A Cardinal’s True Calling
This is the story of one cardinal bird
Who answered a calling that only she heard.She was independent; a strong little thing
Who refused the sweet songs she was told to sing.She felt like the child of a cuckoo, sitting alone,
Just waiting until her cover was blown.Her family tried to bring her in line,
But she told them, “No, my life is mine!”So, off she flew from her childhood home,
Because she decided there’s a world to roam.She traveled to many places, saw many things.
Birds of magnificent colors; they wore tiny foot rings.In Laos, she found her family, though not one of birth.
They taught her to see her beauty and worth.They sang her a melody that pierced her heart,
And she knew she could no longer play a false part.She got the courage to return to her flock.
When they saw her, they all fell over in shock!Gone were the feathers that once covered her head.
Disliking what she’d become, they treated her as dead.She laughed at their horror for she’d accepted her new look.
She’d be who she was meant to, regardless of what it took.She lived her dream and flew high with pride.
She liked her choice; there was no need to hide.You see, she had found her true identity.
It was the lovely Barefaced Bulbul she was meant to be:~)
The small print:~)This site officially supports the protection of all animals, except scary spiders that run at you, alligators, snakes...well, almost all animals. Please be aware that no birds were harmed in the taking of this picture:~)
My Challenge
Since I forgot that last Thursday was THE LAST Thursday of the month, I did not put up my poetry challenge poem as promised.
Instead, you were treated to The Exception’s wonderful guest post, The Passport to Travel Home. Personally, I think you got a better bargain in that deal. If you didn’t read TE’s post, please do so and take time to drop by her site for a visit:~)
Since I didn’t’ meet my obligation, I decided my challenge this week would be to put up two poems this time. So, you get my version of a limerick.
Cuttlefish Limerick
The dish that was cuttlefish
There was a nicely hidden Cuttlefish,
Who thought crab was just a tremendous dish.
With his colorful glow,
he put on quite a show
and became the dish of another fish.
The Challenge
I’m not letting you off the hook just because this is my Poetry Challenge Day:~) So, here’s your challenge question:
These two poems have several things in common. One thing, however, links them together and helps you understand the poem better.
Can you guess what it is and how it helps the reader understand the poem better?









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Note to Readers:
While I am used to seeing my cardinals lose feathers in summer, it occurred to me that some of you may be shocked by this.
Cardinals molt, meaning they lose and replace their feathers in summer. Some, like this female, lose more than others, but the feathers do grow back. I can tell you that I don’t see any featherless cardinals in the winter:~)
The first poem reminded me of my own life… funny, that
And I have to run as it is “open house” and I am running.. um, seriously, I never run late, but here I am running late!! Be back!
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@ An Exceptional 10 Year Old — Okay, when you get from your run, I do hope you will explain a bit more about the first poem:~) I hope the open house is a success!
Are you sure you just didn’t want to join Bulbul?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPU8N7AQzxQ
@ JC — Where do you find these things. I can’t believe there’s a band named Bulbul. A barefaced bird and a band with chickens, what more could we ask for?
Thanks for your contribution to this post:~)
What the two have in common
People trying to be things they shouldn’t be.
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@ desk49/Ellis — I suppose that could one thing in common, but there’s something else that LINKS these two poems:~)
Thanks for the visit, Ellis:~)
I’m glad the cardinal found her true voice. I love that she had adventures along the way. The foot rings had me laughing! I now see blinged-out birds in my mind.
And I enjoyed the limerick (which are really hard to craft).
JC’s video contribution was funny! Takes the chicken dance to a whole other level!
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@ Talon — I agree with you about JC…who knows where he found that:~) I recently saw what I think is same cardinal and she has fluffy feathers on her head now. I guess she’s decided to return to flock. Either that or her parents sent her to someplace for deprogramming.
I was surprised about the limerick. They really do easy, but they aren’t!!!
I am learning that poetry is not my best shot at writing. I love everyone, including you, who writes poetry and now I REALLY appreciate the skill that goes into it:~)
I love cardinals – a pair live around my house and the female visits my back porch frequently. I guess the male is off preening.
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@ Lynn — Cardinals are really pretty birds, except when they’re molting. I love when the fledglings leave the nest and chase their parents. It cracks me up because Cardinal parents seem a bit easy. I once saw a male cardinal feeding what was obviously a “teenage” fledgling. Now, I think the Cardinal parents just drop the babies off at my feeders and FLY QUICKLY away:~)
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts:~)
Hmmm… I really must be blind, because I’m not seeing what the connection could be except that both poems contain… well, words? And fine ones at that!
Must be too early in the morning still. I’ll need to come back when I’ve woken up more.
Hi Sara .. I’ve been thinking about bulbuls … there was a lovely song we had on record as children .. but I can’t find it now!
Is it the rhyming? I loved both poems .. especially your Bulbul one .. that’s special. While there can’t be many limericks about cuttlefish!
TE’s post about her travels was wonderful ..
JC’s chickens were a shock! It’s early here ..
Enjoy the weekend .. and thanks for these – they were great to read .. as was TE’s tour .. that was lovely .. I could just imagine travelling that route too .. Hilary
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@ Hilary — LOL…you are funny. I would guess that JC link might wake anyone one up. However, I’m afraid his LINK took away from the challenge. The barefaced bulbul is a real bird. It was recently discovered in Laos. It’s kind of cool because they don’t understand why it is the way it is. Don’t you love nature? So many variations on a theme…it’s a never ending concert:~)
Enjoy your weekend…I hope the weather and the mood is absolutely smashing:~)
Hi Sara! Oh I love that sweet bird and the poem, wow, can I ever relate to THAT! As for the “link” to the two I’m not getting much connection other than their elusiveness to the eager photographers. Could be I need more coffee this morning. I’ll stay tuned to see what others come up with!
hugs
suZen
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@ SuZen — Thanks for what you said about the poems. BTW my cardinals are looking much better now. Molting is a pretty site:~) I think it’s time I left a BIG hint…oh, this funny, but the laughs on me. Like I said to Tony, I thought this be so clear. It’s like the elephant and blind men.
Thanks for the visit!!!
BIG HINT: CHALLENGE QUESTION
Okay, it’s obvious that what I thought would be “obvious” is not:~) Enough people have commented on this for me to realize the truth.
BIG HINT: As bloggers, what do we use to make connections to each other on the Internet and find information? Both poems contain this thing we use and when IT is used, more information will be found about the Barefaced Bulbul (a real bird) and the Cuttlefish (worth the watch).
I think if you use this THING, both poems make a bit more sense. You must wonder if I’ve gone off my rocker:~)
I like to experiment and sometimes experiments are a smashing success and sometimes they fall to pieces on the cutting room floor. C’est la Vie:~)
I think the similarity is what makes both creatures unique, is also the very feature that will bring it’s downfall. In this case, the attractiveness of the animals.
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@ Collleen — Great reply. You are right that attractiveness is a double-edged sword in the animal world:~)
Well, I’m useless for your challenge but I enjoyed reading both poems and I’d like to read more of this type of writing from you!
Incidentally, I’ve also been publishing poetry on my blog. It’s so much fun to craft when it flows but, alas, it doesn’t always flow. I usually publish them on Fridays (as part of Six Word Fridays that Melissa at Making Things Up leads). But through Tony and another blogger, I learned about One Shot Wednesday and I’m hoping to join in on all that fun one of these days!
I love the creativity you share so generously with us, Sara! I’m inspired!
@ Belinda — Thank you about the poems. I agree with you, when the poem flows freely it’s a wonderful experience, but when you encounter log jams, it can be a difficult journey:~)
Good luck with your poetry. I’ll be checking in to read it. I may not be proficient in writing poetry, but I do enjoy reading it:~)
My braain isn’t clever enough to spot the difference.
So i’ll just appreciate them for the good poems that they are.
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@ Arts web show — Thanks…I don’t think I could ask for more than that:~)
Any intelligent comment I might have made is out the window because i am still laughing at the way you ended that limerick. Love it!
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@ Fireblossom — Thank you, ma’am…we aim to please:~)
First of all sweet Sara thanks for visiting me and leaving such beautiful comments as always love seeing you around so keep coming. And am sorry i was a bit sick in the hospital so never got back on time just came and trying to catch up.
Okay to your two poems i truly love them both and so glad the cardinal bird stood her ground and stayed true to her own self. She by being herself became a gift to others and example of what we should all be like when others are trying to manipulate us to be something we’re not. Such is what i felt both poems had in common the Limerick became a beautiful gift (dish) for another because they both stayed true to their identity. Who wants fakes. Lovely challenges you portray i do so love them. Thanks for sharing x
Wild Rose~
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@ Wild Rose — I hope you are feeling better now!!! I hate visiting hospitals, especially as a patient!
Thank you about the poems. I like your take on them. Both the cardinal and the Cuttlefish do stay true to their identities:~)
Hi Sara,
I’ve never seen a cardinal in molting stage before..
Is the common denominator a hyperlink?
And poor crab..cannot help he’s delicious:)
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@ Joy — YEAH!!! Someone finally got it. The idea was that when you click on the hyperlink, you get to learn about the Bulbul and the Cuttlefish, which by the way is an amazing fish/squid.
Thanks for taking on the challenge and the visit:~)
I love the limerick, Sara.
When poems rhyme they draw me right in. What I think these two poems have in common is…they have to do with showing your true self? It’s about identity. Though in the first one it’s more of a humble journey with a happy ending. In the second one it’s more of an egotistical journey that didn’t end happily… at least for the cuttlefish.
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@ Davina — You came up with a unique way to look at the connections. You are absolutely right. Both the Cuttlefish and the Cardinal found their unique identities. There is no other fish/squid that does what the Cuttlefish does. He is unique as is the Barefaced Bulbul cardinal:~) I guess that’s what is wonderful about comments. People give you a totally different way of seeing something…
Thanks:~)